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I need the joy by ~kikibug13:iconkikibug13:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Married Romance > Sonnet


I need the joy that in your eyes alight
When meeting mine just sometimes do shine with
I need the joy your arms embracing tight
When close again, sweetly do me twine with
I need the tenderness your lips so sweet
When meeting mine my open heart does feel
I need the tenderness of soul complete
That when I'm in your sight melts shell of steel
I need the laughter on your gentle lips
Caress of fingers long and strong and silk
I need the warmth, in flooding or in sips
I need your love, in every shape and ilk.

And every time you give them all to me
My soul is singing - love was meant to be
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Author's Comments

This is again a poem stemmed from roleplay. A lot less bound to specific circumstances, which is good since that character is unlikely to spew rhyme ;)

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Mood: Joy ~Imperator-Lawrence Jan 21, 2008, 6:20:37 AM
Hello again. Methinks your poetry is getting better!

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"WE ARE THE BORG. LOWER YOUR SHIELDS AND SURRENDER YOUR SHIPS. YOUR BIOLOGICAL AND TECHNOLOGICAL DISTINCTIVENESS WILL ADAPT TO SERVICE US. RESISTANCE IS FUTILE." --The Borg
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~kikibug13 Jan 21, 2008, 8:06:20 AM
Well hello, and THANK YOU :D I am glad you like.

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Thou Art God!
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~windbirdy Jan 26, 2008, 5:35:09 PM
you seem to have a strong command of what you're saying; i don't think i've seen a style quite like yours. i really like the imagery and detail. =D
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~kikibug13 Jan 27, 2008, 3:13:06 AM
:heart: Thank you very much! I don't think I actually aim at some style; I write words and verses as they come. Especially for more fixed forms, like a sonnet, I sometimes need to fiddle a little to get the metric and the internal rhythm quite right, but the content... it flows.

Thank you muchly for reading and taking the time to comment! And I am glad you like it :D

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Thou Art God!
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